I like the ideas you have mentioned in your writing. Can you right align your work rather than centering please. Explanation writing can easily change to more of a persuasive type of writing.
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I like the ideas you have mentioned in your writing. Can you right align your work rather than centering please. Explanation writing can easily change to more of a persuasive type of writing.
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